What our Ivy-educated editors look for:
- Rely on personal details to “show” not “tell.” Remove abstractions and unsupported assertions.
- Address the question and ensure the essay’s organization reflects its topic while confirming sentence structure is varied and not detracting from your argument’s lucidity.
- Capture the hurried admissions committee’s attention from the first sentence. Ensure the essay ends with a sense of closure and balance and that every paragraph aligns with your theme.
- Make the reader like you by ensuring a clear voice free of the clichés which haunt so many personal statements. We seek to bring you to life as more than a collection of grades, extracurriculars, and test scores.
- Ensure your writing style and grammar do not detract from your story, omitting all instances of wordiness, run-on sentences, errors in word choice, and other common mistakes. If a sentence or word does not contribute to your narrative, we either cut it or restructure it.
- Confirm that transitions are smooth, that all paragraph breaks are natural, and that supporting details are adequate.
- Synergize all the essays in a single application, in the event we receive more than one. The varying writing must present different but not contradictory facets of your personality and background.
- We help you communicate to the committee that you are not only a standardized test score and a transcript but a real-life engaging personality who will thrive both in the classroom and on campus.
More than an edit:
- We provide a critique calling out significant changes we make and areas we feel need more details from your life.
- We do it all within 48 hours, or within 24 hours if you need expedited service.
- We provide access to your primary editor, so you may ask clarifying questions by email upon receiving your edit and critique.
- We protect your privacy. View our business principles.
Types of documents we edit:
- Admissions essays
- Waitlist letters
- Letters of recommendation
- Scholarship essays

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