Samples of Our Work
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Samples of Our Work: College #1
The original draft demonstrated a type of sophistication, offering a non-failure failure that improved rather than detracted from your candidacy. An evocative anecdote in the essay improved on a sincere discussion of your compassion and humanitarian spirit. The original draft covered material in turn, painting a portrait of an individual inspired from within.
Samples of Our Work: College #2
The original draft included a strong, highly-visual image. Clearly you have seen more of life than many of your sheltered peers from developed countries.
Samples of Our Work: College #3
Among the strengths of the original draft were its sincere tone and its notable charm. It is clear you are a keen photographer, as shown by your self-knowledge and introspective examinations of the same.
Samples of Our Work: College #4
Your personal statement covered a long scope of real world achievements, successfully adding value to your candidacy. It was made clear that your passion for software engineering was genuine and well-informed by industry experience.